If I could tell you why I love you
It would show you nothing new
If I could tell you why I love you
I'd say more of me than you
If I could tell you why I love you
You would think I was cukoo
So, I won't tell you why I love you
Just assure you that I do
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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very very very cute!! so deep and yet so lighthearted,.. its a pleasure reading your work!!! luv and cheers, shuvi
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Lighthearted seriousness
We may educate our loved ones into abstract thought and spiritual growth by answers like this adorable poem of yours. If I tell you I love you because ...(emerald pixies with golden dresses and silver ribbons dance in your eyes), you may become so selfconscious that you may start wearing sunglasses.
I am sure your daughter will think out answers exactly like those you taught her.
Love
Myra
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Eureeka!
You are right! (and I'm allergic to Pixie dust anyways)
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it's cute, and i really like it.
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Thanks
Very nice of you to stop by.
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Perfect
Al, you did a wonderful job of expressing how it doesn't matter why, it matters period, no questions asked. Though sometimes it is nice to know why, just for purposes of flattery, you know how we woman are. Anyway, you did a great job. This was one that did not make me utterly confused and give me a headache (not hard at times). Love you.
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Awwww...
And I just bought stock in Tylenol! This is something I wrote spontaneously for my daughter to answer her question. When she becomes a woman I know she will demand a better answer.
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I rally like this Al, it's short and sweet, the rhyme and flow work well here aswell. Well done
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Youh are so sweet. Thanks.
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Bravo!
Hey this is cute lol
whats your point hun.....
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point???
My point? Does everything need a point?
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I like it. It's short and simple and true. You can't try telling people why you love them, because if it's shallow enough for words it's not love. They've got to trust you. I like the poem.
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why thanks.
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