Tears are rolling down my cheeks
Your eyes are the one I seek
Yet they have gone now
Yet I still feel them some how
Your soul is a wonder
My heart asunder
My love, leave me not
Your beauty I will not have forgot
Captured my heart
Why must this all fall apart
You were so dear to me
Yet you did not see
How close I held you to my soul
I don't even know if I have this all under control
A gape has formed
Deep within my heart, it's torn
Bleeding from my wound
Afraid this will end all to soon
Will love ever return?
Comments
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I liked the way you typed the poem. I could feel what you were feeling. Your a great poem writer. Keep it up.
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painfully real and dark
The flow of your poem was great. I could feel the pain and loneliness, wondering if your Love would ever return to you... Great job!
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