Constant curiosity my mind may never conceive
Shall I ever have YOUR peace for more than a day?
Wishing to have an ability I know cannot be attained
I know my thoughts, yet whose I don’t I care more about
The choice I wish to not make may be my only one
And I despise that choice
Sitting here my tears running down my cheeks freely
My friend passes me a note explaining her feelings
Surprisingly they’re the same as mine
My tears falling faster…
The choice I thought I might have to make
Is now the one I know I have to, upon ‘their’ chosen words
So speak now dear indecisive, for my choice hangs on your every word.
Author notes
I wrote this in my Spanish 3 class.... I don't really like writting poems that I don't rhyme with, but this is just how I felt, and what went on the paper. <3
Written May 1st, 2006
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This was very good rhyme or not you have a way with words I think you just flowing with your feelings came out great and strong lots of love Robin...aka SH
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Good poem.
I use to always rhyme, but now if the poem does, it does, if it doesn't, it doesn't. Don't let it bother you. There just more freedom to express yourself, when you have the choice. Hope the decision came out ok.
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