Loneliness is defined
As being without company
Being cut off from others
In a sense of not having anyone
But is it possible to not be
Alone and still feel lonely
At times when you池e by yourself walking
Down a almost deserted hallway
Or when you alone thinking about
The things that are happening
And happened in your life
I experience this a lot
The thing is I知 not alone
I have someone to love
But the loneliness I had
Before this relationship began
Just seems to stick with me.
For a long time I thought
It was gone because of the
New found love I have for
This great man but now it
Seems I masked the loneliness
With love and happiness.
Yes I知 happy with the guy
I知 with yes I love him so much
I would die for him but there痴
Still the loneliness I shouldn't
Be feeling is it because of past
Things that happened in my life
Or is it because of some of the
New things i知 doing. The passion
That I share with this great man
Is so strong the love is so strong
That when we made passionate love
My heart soared to new heights and
We were left speechless
But that loneliness
The stupid feeling I have inside
That just won稚 seem to disappear.
Every now and then
It fades but then when i知 alone
Thinking to me it reappears
When i知 with my love this
Feeling doesn't exist
But it's still there just waiting
For me to be alone
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Written November 15th, 2006
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There is a hint of loneliness still within this piece, which to be careful explains that you can indeed feel lonely with others around. You seem very thoughtful at the best of times, and lots on your mind takes you from others sadly, Great feeling in this write, but sadly so,
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excellent write
a very good write. i totally felt all of the raw emotion and frustration in that poem. lonliness is an everyday thing. i think that lonliness is just a part of our innate human nature and that we all have a fear of being alone rooted deep within us all. it only comes out when we make ourselves succeptible to it. i can really relate to you on this write. lonliness doesnt always hit you when youre alone. sometimes ill be walking down a crowded sidewalk and it'll feel like im the only person on the face of the earth. being lonely sucks but hey, its just a part of life and its only what you make it out to be.
Rob -
this is really good
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