Times flashing by
Sing sing
Scream your way out
Don’t stop
Live this death to the fullest
I am here
Not with this
Long gone
Up high
Need survival
Times being missed
Passed by
Broken
Glued
Mouth swollen
Brown eyes bruised
Time flies
Sky is red
Ground black
Houses blue
Why stop
Just play
Don’t escape
Shine
Sign
Be fine
Lie lie lie
Let love
Live this
Kill them
I’m blind
Complain to him
Don’t read more
Kill more
Who am I
What is this
Where are you
BUT WHY???
Author notes
RANDOM RANDOM… RANDOM THOUGHTS… FILL THE MIND AND PELUTE WHAT'S THOUGHT
Written November 15th, 2006
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I love this poem
i picked up a totally different thing from this than anyone else did
because of its randomness i was thinking more along the lines of tripping on drugs... but that's just me
but i love this poem none-the-less i love randomness and you seem really down-to-earth
lisa
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randomalicious
i followed a little...i really like it, and i agree with Evil Sofa..except you dont sleep with me..
teehee-xshotx
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No trust me you don’t want to agree with Lauren
she only said that to make fun of my friend on here. but yeah it’s all good. I like this poem too. I don’t know it’s random but it fits so well. I think it was a great outcome. And thank you for the comment. I am glad that you like it.
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I imagined a little skinny emo guy screaming at the top of his lungs for this. Blasting through a speaker an overwieght girl purges her lunch as her best friend cuts a gash in her leg. Good stuff.
(I only says this because you sleep with me)
Just Kidding.
Really.
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Yeah i have to agree and say Holy Shit ... this is awesome.....great write
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I swear when I read such poems, i think RAW, it's like thoughts, just nicely put together. nice going
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HOLY SHIT! i feel like i just got run over by a stampede of random zoo animals. haha very cool, i dont think ive ever seen a poem like this. its different, but still has the same old goodness of the things you write. wow that sounded really weird, negh whatever. yeah i saw this one when i was uploading the gothic dolly link.
stunned into submission
~~~ektor
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