sad, sad girl intuits
love of a greater kind
wants it for herself
love beyond flesh and words
beyond the heart and mind
real love from the soul
sad, sad girl must learn that
such love can never be
of or for the self
such love can only be
of and from the spirit
sad, sad girl denies
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Why do people deny the only thing that can bring them happiness?
Written November 15th, 2006
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I didn't understand it till the author comment, and it's a good question, kind of open ended, so many answers and so many can be right depending on who the person is
i liked the repetition of sad,sad girl.
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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This was not actually written for you. You have experienced unconditional love, both giving and receiving. You are fantastic.
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Your critique is longer than the poem! Ha ha ha. You will. Very soon, you will.
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No, one cannot breathe air through their ass, though if I could, well I would try it. I can't speak a word about unconditional love, as I have never experienced it, therefore I cannot be critical or offer any words based on prior experience. I can however, agree with the write completely. People often do deny the one thing that can bring them happiness (self included) Great write, short, sweet, but definately to the point. Love you.
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Some may dissagree, Lexie, that is true. But, they will never experience unconditional love either. Just like you can't breathe air through your ass, only your lungs, you can not experience unconditional love through the self, only through the spirit.
Edited on Nov 15, 6:04 p.m. because ''. -
Some may diasgree Al, love cant be explained it just is.
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