Once life begins
Budded in the spring,
Awaiting for its right time,
To spread in her lavish colors of lime.
To spread the freshness we breathe
tempering our lust to heat
breaking through the deep spread roots
feeding the moist from the soil.
Where the nature sings and the breeze swings
Were the growth begins, holding, waiting
Luring, lavishing to its end…
Summer begin.
So the sun shines harder, to remind
that time never stays the same.
so be prepared of change
the buds bloom to flowers
Flowers preparing for the fruits…
Not waiting for anyone,
Preparing its reality within its fruits.
That’s the summer, where the time goes fast
where everything seems so harsh
but if you wait and see, it’s the time for us to breath
we are so busy in this summer heat
we don’t realize the summer has past.
It’s the nature’s rule, what begins must meets its end
The crimson shades and scarlet surrounds
The leaves sway and weep the ground
life to its adieu to welcome autumn
Life once again places its bound
And patiently waits, waits till the time
Passes hidden in colds of the winters air
We cover our self with more clothes
As the nature teaches a lesson
But we are too active minded to learn
So the winter end so does the natures wait
Once again; the life begin
Budded in the spring...
Author notes
Written November 15th, 2006
4. Season(s)
A contest entry
- Nature contest :) by Entwining Beauty.
625 points, ended September 15, 2007, 11 entries
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The thing about an anonymous contest is that when
the grammar is off a little I can’t tell if it’s caused by
a translation. The idea is a good one but it doesn’t
read correctly. I’m sorry. Thank you for entering
my contest.
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thanks.. can i reneter any other poem
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excellently written poem very beautiful good luck
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Nice poem and you stuck to my favorite option. Great choice! Thank you for entering!
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Nice one!
This is really nice, when i read your poetry I always do it with a red hot sun in my mind so it was so nice to read it with green spring and buds and you are so right we don't see the seasons properly anymore.
Barbara
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Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Beautifully written. So soft the stages can really be if we take the time to notice. It all goes so certainly fast.
Such a meaningful write.
Peace to you
Jeri
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thanks
hey jeri..thanks for ur sweet comment..well i m busy for this 2 months in my skool work..
iam really glad that u liked my poem
regards
abuyi
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