time crawls by
waiting for the phone to ring
time slows to almost a stop
waiting to hear his voice
time goes by without a glance
waitng to hear those 3 little words
time cheats as evening turns to night
waiting to be reassured
time flies by, late into the night
waiting ends with a simple message
time to sleep after reading "I'm so sorry"
waitng for the tears to stop and sleep to come.
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Written November 15th, 2006
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I certainly can relate here. When we're worried and/or lonely, our minds can wander into all manner of dangerous imaginings and when we're haunted in this way, time has a way of moving painfully slow. I hope this write isn't about you and if it is, just know your in company with someone who knows. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed! Be blessed.--Kel
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oh that is sad
i really liked it though, i dunno what i liked but i just did...good write for doing that, and thank you so much for commenting on my poems it is muchly appreciated xoxox
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A Good start
This piece has potential, its not bad as it is , but could be much better with a little tweaking
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