I'm
A dad
A doctor
A nurse,a chef
A cleaner,a judge
A bright merry go round
My home's a circus, complete
with clowns. A swinging trapeze,in
fine form. No rehearsal,it's showtime.
Really, I'm a multi juggling mum.
In a list
A contest entry
- Win another Gold for a Gold! by LadyInRed55.
300 points, ended June 12, 2007, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TELL ME WHO YOU ARE by Whispering Wind.
700 points, ended December 11, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Etheree Me Please (Contest) by Paloszoo.
625 points, ended October 6, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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this is adorable...
Congrats!
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Very cute! This is how I feel sometimes! Well done! Thanks for entering my contest. I’m honored that you would show your work here. Keep up the great work!
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SMILES~
this is just the way most Mom's would feel...I am so pleased to meet you and thank you kindly for sharing with me *hug*
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Haha... You're one busy person there, if it's actually true, which I could imagine would be impossible, especially being a Mum and a Dad (physically that is, not in looking after wise). Great write, gave me a little chuckle!
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Really cute
Yes being a mum can be all of that and more but at the end of the day we love it.
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nice poem, i don't have a clue what it would be like to be a mother, seeing im a 19 y/o guy, but your poem does shed some light on the fact that it aint easy. I have some experience in havin to mould myself into multiple charaters so i guess i could relate to that. interesting style you have also, i dont know much about poetry styles, other than free verse, haiku and ryhme, but its always interesting to see something different. Also, i tried to go to your profile and check you out, but i think its a faulty link coz it said the page doesnt exist. but anyway, nice to meet you system and good luck in the contest
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Sometimes it's hard to be everything for everyone and the such all the time. I often feel like this and it brings you down lots. Thanks for sharing, and I sympathize. Love the Rictameter form also.
You've just been hoodwinked!
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Well, that sounds just like my house, and my life... you ain't taking over my life are you? Wait, now that might be a good thing, am I going on vacation? woo hoo vacation! Wait, my momma always told me if it sounds too good to be true chances are it is...let me guess this is just a poem and not real life huh? Drats I knew it...lmbo. Nice job here, and you guess it, yep.... hoodwinked once again, so rather you like it or not, you got to find one more spot in that house you call a circus for three more of those yellow fellas, hope you have a big house cause us poetic bandits, we just have an abundance of these little guys to give away to deserving poets like yourself. Have a wonderful day dear!
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Wow sounds like my home at times. Your write made me laugh! Such a creative write and I love the picture.
Excellent flow and content.
You have just been Hood-Winked by the Poetic Bandits
Have a wonderful day!!!!
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Thank you so much for entering!!! {Rest of quirky comment withheld until the end...]
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Here is the rest woman: You have such a varying sense of poetic indulgence; this is a fine show of why I love ya so much!
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This is a cute poem and I can see you are a hard worker and a very strong individual. Thanks so much for entering this contest!
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Sisters are the most wonderful thing anyone can have. Please apply to the family group, using the title of your poem as your reason why.
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I love the tone of this...hecticly fun...I completely relate. The form is perfect as is the picture. Great penning!
Good luck in this contest.
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This poem was wonderfully short and sweet, however, the rules of the contest were not followed. Please correct this
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Thanks for fixing it! I appreciate it!
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great, sweet, fast, merry, and... tiring, isn't it?but you take it with great panache, hats off to... lady
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Cute..
Wow.. this is damn cute and so true.. I lovee these lines! Thanks for your entry! Best of Luck in my contest! GOD bless you! 
**$h@Mz**
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i love this one..so less words but so much said..its an awesome idea..i like it how u call urself the juggling mum...lol...shows u hve lotsa responsibilities..great work..
good luck
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Wow, this is so true plus a thousand other jobs!! There is no harder job than being a mother, what a wonderful piece, great job
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This is so very true. Motherhood, the most complex job. Yet overlooked as being substantial by so many. Under , appreciated, over worked, under paid. Yet to hear I love you or receive that kiss makes it all worth while. Loved this. Thank you for sharing, best of luck to you. Dawn
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