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Please don't take my baby

Please don’t take my baby…
I miss her more each day though I lie otherwise.
She’s gone, I know…
Why do I only miss her at night when things seem worse?

Why do I only want her back when I’m alone?
Why did I hate the times we were together?
Why do I cherish those same moments now?

Please don’t take my baby…
She’s almost gone without your help.
I did all the pushing myself.
Aren’t I proud of myself, destroying the best thing that happened?

Why do I only want her back when I’m drunk?
Why do I hate what she did and who she is?
Why do I cherish all the scars she left?

Please don’t take my baby…
The only one who ever loves me.
No matter how much I hurt her.
How long do we have left?

Author notes

oh god i dunno, its 1am and i was feeling creative! make of it what you will.
Written November 14th, 2006

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  • Briteshadow
    November 26, 2006
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    well, hope ur ok at uni and everything...give me a txt if u need me matey .x.


    • starsandwishes
      December 6, 2006
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      lol dunno how often you check this thing out, didnt even think you used it anymore! thanx for being there as always x