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If Only

If only I could ask someone
Then maybe I would understand
If only I could look inside
And see precisely who I am

If only life would open up
The doors of mystery
If only light would shine so bright
And lead the way for me

If only my reflection
Could divulge what’s really there
If only our appearance wouldn’t
Dictate what is fair

If only I could show the world
What lies inside of me
‘Cause who I am is not the same
As who I chose to be

Author notes

this was for a school assignment
Written November 14th, 2006

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  • HaleyMary
    May 22, 2008

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    This is beautiful. I like the flow of this and I liked the second last stanza the best. It makes me think of how sometimes there may be more to people than meets the eye. And, first impressions may not always be correct. Keep writing.


  • Jake Jackson
    November 24, 2006

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    very true very true indeed my freind. ive been gone for a while and you have made grate progress, keep wrighting.
    ~Josh R.~