If only I could ask someone
Then maybe I would understand
If only I could look inside
And see precisely who I am
If only life would open up
The doors of mystery
If only light would shine so bright
And lead the way for me
If only my reflection
Could divulge what’s really there
If only our appearance wouldn’t
Dictate what is fair
If only I could show the world
What lies inside of me
‘Cause who I am is not the same
As who I chose to be
Author notes
this was for a school assignment
Written November 14th, 2006
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This is beautiful. I like the flow of this and I liked the second last stanza the best. It makes me think of how sometimes there may be more to people than meets the eye. And, first impressions may not always be correct. Keep writing.


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very true very true indeed my freind. ive been gone for a while and you have made grate progress, keep wrighting.
~Josh R.~


