She came to me by moonlight
in the hour of my need
when chilling nights
had left me longing.
She found me in the darkness
as a lamb lost
in wayward motions...
alone without a guiding hand,
and with sharing hands in heated touch
I made my way in the night.
In secret, we lie together
vulnerable to each other,
naked and open.
Her dark hair fell over my breasts
as she leaned over me.
With tongue softly searching mine,
gently but determined
she breathed the Sun into my skin
and held so closely in her arms
I felt the warmth of day return.
I sensed a melting,
moist and euphoric
as she rose to lie upon me.
Spilling her body onto mine,
grinding warmth to warmth
in a tender thrusting.
Though the cold night
fell around us
I felt nothing
but the incandescence
of her vanilla scented skin.
The hot friction of thighs
and hips
and breasts...
The tepid dampness
of swollen cunts
pushing into one another.
Melting
warmly...
in our love.
Heavily she breathes
and soft cries broke though
the stillness.
My own breathing sporadic
with deep, warm kisses
while the peaking came
and swept us both
into the heavens.
Sun showers of sensation
and sound
and touch
flooded through the ice
of longing.
She slept
entangled in me.
Wrapped tightly together
away from the world,
we hid in placid dreams.
My once chilling night...
now drenched in her warmth.
Author notes
Written November 14th, 2006
A contest entry
- Lesbian Erotica, Ya'll wanna enter by A-Sky-Lark.
725 points, ended November 23, 2007, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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OMG, fucking beautiful. I loved this so much, it's EXACTLY what I was looking for. Wasn't just sex but the love of the relationship and that's what made it so beautiful. I love it, you are my hero. Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering.
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Emotionless erotica has always seems quite pointless to me. I'm pleased to know someone else feels the same...
Thanks you for taking time to leave such a considerate comment... I truly appreciate it.
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Nicely Done
Nicely done on this piece. I loved it. Well done on writing such a captivating piece. Thank you for your entry and good luck.
Keep writing
Countrybabe
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Thank you for your kind comments. I'm pleased you liked it.
Have a peachy day!
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Very beautiful. Nicely done, very descriptive but in a good way. I really like part:
"she breathed the Sun into my skin
and held so closely in her arms
I felt the warmth of day return"
I like how you've described what she's feeling, by using the sun. Nice
Good Luck.
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Excellent piece of writing.
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Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it.
Peace
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Well, ya know... inside of me is a raging erotica writer. I'm trying to let her be free.
Did I really get the story across??! Ah, that's good news. Thanks for reading it, dear Tad.
All my love to you-
Chrissy -
I'm sorry you were mislead by the title, but I appreciate you taking the time to comment. I thank you for expressing your view point. I can respect that belief even though it is not my own.
God promotes love, not discrimination.
Peace to you.
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Okay, generally I -hate- erotica. Take that into consideration. But this wasn't crap. Perhaps because I wasn't seeing it as a heterosexual thing but secondly it was well-written, lyrical and perceptive and you really told a story.
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Every now and then I get discouraged when the words in my soul don't spill onto paper as easily as I'd like, but I'll never give up. I'm a writer... it's my curse and my gift.
Hang onto the gift as well, friend. It's well worth it.
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well! this was not what i was expecting by the title when i opened this. i don't believe in same sex relationships, the bible says its an abomination to God. as a poem goes though, it reads smoothly.
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wow, this is so powerful. the passion here is amazing- brought me back to a while ago. so well done, great poem.
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This was definatly hot and sensual. I thank you for sharing this and hope to read more.
Shade -
great work very passinate and deep keep up the great work can't wait to read more from you you are gifted never let your gift go keep writing i about let mine go and no it is hard for me to write my poems anymore slowly it is coming back but it has been a while God bless you child
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Pretty words...
Thank you for reading this one. It's kind of special to me because it's really my first poem of this nature.
-Peace & Understanding
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I'm so pleased you liked it. I am bisexual as well, and I know the secrecy very well... but am able comfort in it.
Thank you for your kind words.
Peace always, friend.
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Darling Abbey Normal
Oh that was you
passionate in the dark
who I came to
loving your beautiful heart.
Smoosh
Janet -
I am a bisexual woman and this describes how we as the significant other has to be. I loved this for it describe our secrecy to a T but also the love between us...Thank you for the great read.
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PS. Realising that I, myself, have been guilty of appreciating an erotic piece without commenting... I can only say that at times I've found certain poems to leave me rather speachless. I don't really know how to appropriately comment when I'm stunned.
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That's a very interesting interpretation. I kind of like this spin on it although that's not quite what I had in mind when I wrote it.
Thank you very much for your comment. I truly appreciate it.
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Hmmm... I don't remember seeing that poem of yours. I'll have to check it out... and I'll be sure to comment.
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good job
Somehow this reminded me of an evil wearwolf in search of a woman to love... this is really good. I enjoyed how the events developed. -
I have noticed that, too. I posted one the other day..granted its pretty graphic, but so was Bukowski, and that was the point. They read to what...get off? And then don't have the courtesy to say thank you?
lmao
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Yes, that totally makes sense to me. Though, I can't explain it... I know exactly what you mean.
Thank for your sweet words. I've noticed that many read erotica around here, but few actually comment. I wonder why...
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Beautiful, really. But to start the day at work with this? hahaha. But seriously, this is very sensual. It is what it should be, and seems as if it was what it should have been. No crit on this...you caught the beauty and essence of what it should be. If that makes sense to you.
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