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Sonnet of the Nighttime



Night does not just blanket the world in shade,
It's when writers eagerly pen and erase
When scholars discuss the findings they’ve made,
And artists dance, and paint, and scuplt, and trace.
It’s when down the dejected tears cascade,
Anger rages through a heartbroken face,
When madness makes sensibilities fade,
Jealousy reigns o’er a terrorized place.
It's when a man has eyes for a young maid,
And these lovers find magic in embrace,
And longing anxious lips does passion bade,
In a hearts flutt’ring and romance’s chase.
Nighttime does something that denies the day,
It beckons emotions to come and play.






Author notes

This is based on a philosphy that I have about the night: The nighttime does something to people, it beckons the emotions to come out and play.... That night brings out and amplifies the strongest emotions in people- whether its of love or sadness, anger, jealousy, happiness, etc. The best conversations are had at night, the most passionate romances, the saddest feelings of defeat and self worthlessness- all brought out in the night.

Written November 14th, 2006

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 18, 2007
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    this is great and nicely written

    wonderfully pen and read nice also


  • islekine gold member
    August 10, 2007
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    Very well done...

    In finalist list...so far.
    Thanks!
    *PEACE*


  • Taxing Minds
    November 14, 2006
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    You're language and poetic skills are so good it almost sickens me haha. Good writing.