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Falling for you.

I'm loosing all concentration.
My destination is your arms.
Determination , Damnation.
I think I've come to a realization.
I'm falling for you,
Nothing i can do.
Careful with your life.
It holds a price.
Come back to me then we will see.
I know he's family but please be safe.
Saying no guts, no glory.
Forget all that.
For me to want you we don't have to have all that.
Four days till now please come home.
I'm falling for you and you have to know.
Whats done is done.
No coming undone.
Just please lord hold them in your wing.
And home will you bring them please.

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Fighting4Life, EyesLikeFear, SoulfulScreams, Pedal-lessRose, WhiteRoseEulogy,

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