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Dead

We are dancing in the streets for the last time
with our flesh falling off our rotting face
Due to rigor mortis we can't keep a line
But why are all the people running away

Oh ho ho we are dead done having lots of fun
Killed by a drink a knife or a loaded gun
We are dead done having lots of fun
But we eat your brains so you better run

When i was living i was quite the little cutie
I'd try to find a nice boy when out at night
Now that I'm dead they won't say hi to me
Even if I'm green can't i be a pretty sight

Oh ho ho we are dead done having lots of fun
Killed by a drink a knife or a loaded gun
We are dead done having lots of fun
But we eat your brains so you better run

Don't be scared breathing one
And come all the idiotic brains
If i were you i wouldn't make a fuss
Because we will get you all the same

Oh ho ho we are dead done having lots of fun
Killed by a drink a knife or a loaded gun
We are dead done having lots of fun
But we eat your brains so you better run

Author notes

This is my first,and hopefully not my last,joke song.On some albums there are joke songs made to be funny or just put a smile on your face.This is one of those songs.
Written November 14th, 2006

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  • C.I.M.A Punk
    April 27, 2008

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    It sounds like a zombie anthem.
    It's a fun song for a light-hearted horror band.
    The rhyming is nice and the story is cool.
    Well done and good luck!


  • harajukuprincess
    November 20, 2007
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    thanks for etering, good luck to you!!!


  • Erik Ambrose gold member
    September 1, 2007
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    Funny and light hearted. Good write, but lack of punctuation annoys me.


  • Snakehips Pete
    August 19, 2007
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    Brilliantly illiterate.


  • So Strange
    August 19, 2007

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    I'm sorry but you didn't use either of the three options for this contest...I have to disqualify you. It might've been great, but you didn't follow any rules and you didn't pick a option.


  • torieshawesum
    August 9, 2007
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    WOOH! THIS FUCKER IS RETARDED!!!!! WOOOH! thx for entering!


  • Death of the Author
    February 6, 2007
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    Hey good job, it has the playfulness of My Chemical Romance =) thanks for entering. Good luck and take care x


  • AnnaJayne silver member
    November 14, 2006
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    Hmm interesting... lol Its good. Such weird things make u laugh strange child lol.

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