To my Lil Angel,
You are the blood in my veins,
But the poison that stops it's flow.
You are the air I breathe,
Yet you takes my breath away.
You are my heart and soul,
Yet they are your toys at times.
This is my love
And I love you so.
This is my love,
And I want you to know.
You can break me in a million ways,
And I'll keep coming back.
This is because I love you with all I am,
And for me to leave you means I am nothing
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Written November 13th, 2006
A contest entry
- Find Love Again by FallenFrmGrace.
600 points, ended June 1, 2007, 27 entries
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i've heard this before...
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i love you baby and im sorry i can be poison sometimes... you know that i love you and i dont ever want to hurt you... great write baby
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Dark Soul Reaper~
Hey! I thought that this was a really good write. I like what you did with it. Keep on writing, I will read some more of your work later.
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awwwwwwwwwww this is too cute and sweet...do keep writing...comment my stuff? thankies ♥'s *~Windy~*
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tremendous, very loving write, u show that eventhough the person sometimes could be a poison that stops the blood from flowing through your veins or maybe even takes your breath away - it's actually, take my breath away ...anyway, you still love the person, very sweet of you to write such an amazing write like this, cute, it's nice!
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Awh, this is kind of sad. I do like it though, love is amazing and doesn't hurt if it's true. Sure, there are tests, but you only come out stronger in the end. Nice piece and keep up the good work.
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