You lay me down
Hold my heart
In love I drown
Before you rip me apart
And now I lay
Hurt and pained
Everything you say
Keeps me from staying sane
And now I’m down to my last breath
In my dying breath, my hearts health
Rough and ragged from all you’ve put me through
Please know, please hear, I still love you
Through it all, I held strong
Waiting for you to tell me I belong
But now it’s gone; now it’s over
My drunken heart can’t become sober
You stole my heart
And kept it still
Till you in part
Make your kill
What can I say?
What can I do?
I still dream away
Of times I’ve spent with you
And now I’m down to my last breath
In my dying breath, my hearts health
Rough and ragged from all you’ve put me through
Please know, please hear, I still love you
Through it all, I held strong
Waiting for you to tell me I belong
But now it’s gone; now it’s over
My drunken heart can’t become sober
I’m down to my last breath
But just in case there’s one left
Remember this, remember now
Who loves you still somehow
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Written November 13th, 2006
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*Sits in silence from stunningness of poem*. Wow. Totally fab. My favourite lines were "My drunken heart can’t become sober". You have an amazing talent, keep up the good work xx

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