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A Nickel For Your Nightmare

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A Nickel For Your Nightmare(50 words)


Don't beg entry into my psyche,
For it is a cage of screams and dementia;
And once the insanity invades your core
You will rip your flesh from the bone
In futile effort to escape hysteria.
So, run home baby and hide under the covers,
`Cause you'll suffer in here.

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Image by: grammabeth at deviantart.com
Written November 13th, 2006

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  • TwistedBloodyLilly silver member
    November 14, 2006
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    I agree whole-heartedly my friend! Thanks for the applause.
    Lady Lilly


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    November 13, 2006
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    it would be nice, if sometimes others would just leave a soul alone and not turn on the lights.


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    November 13, 2006
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    very strong write and a unique piece among the rest. thanks for joining us here....


    al