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Gaylene ...( AliceinPoetryLand)...(arcostic)

 

  Gaylene you are my very special mum...thats true

  AliceinPoetryLand ... thats what they call you 

  You always are so proud of me, and the things i do 

  Loving you forever is no more than you deserve 

  Everytime, you feel you need a hug, just yell, i got plenty in reserve 

  No-one, could ask for a nicer AP mum, if they do they got  a nerve

   Everyday, you show your love for me so much...thats more than my mum ever did.      


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   ~ I love you so much Mum I wanted everyone to know !!! ~

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Dedicated to my AP Mum AliceinPoetryLand just coz i love her
Written November 13th, 2006

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  • Madhumita
    May 28, 2007

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    Awesome...so very true about my ap Grandmom!!! Awesome write...a cute, rhyming acrostic (I m actually a bit obsessed with this form these days...specially rhyming ones!!!)wonderful dedication...keep up!!!


  • honey bear
    March 13, 2007

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    thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this very love filled and lovely dedication to your AP mother, i am sure she will love this very special write


    • The Poetic Angel
      March 13, 2007

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      fanx u Honey Bear for the nice comment and fanx for hosting a contest for us all to show how much our mum's mean to us xxx cheeky xxx


  • Cat -lover08
    March 5, 2007

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    Awww

    Hey sis this is a great write for mum, I hope you win a place, gold would be good, luvs an hugs ~Gem~


  • panegyric ink
    January 1, 2007

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    A beautifully awsome Tribute...

    that makes the heart always sing with joy and the happiness ...of friendships!!!!
    your bIBrO,
    -fallower.

  • panegyric ink
    December 7, 2006
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    here i can actually sense the feel...

    ...of warm love. very nice.


    • The Poetic Angel
      December 7, 2006
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      fanx fallower i do love her so much she is the only mum i got ... smiles ~cheeky~

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 16, 2006

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    Beautiful

    Awwwwww Sis this is just so beautiful, Gaylene is one special lady I agree, and I love her as much as I do you...Love you always Josephine.


    • The Poetic Angel
      November 17, 2006
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      awww sis yea i agree she sure is n i got the best Mum i love her n i love you aswell xxxxxxxxx


  • DJ Harley silver member
    November 16, 2006

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    very nice write cheeky love you xoxoxoxoxoxox you did a very wonderful job on this to gaylene.

    '
    your big
    Master


    • The Poetic Angel
      November 17, 2006
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      fanx u Master i love my AP Mum so very much ... i love u aswell ~Your cheeky ~ xx


  • The Poetic Angel
    November 14, 2006
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    fanx u tawk for the appluse n kind comment...i have these rose in red aswell ..i snaged them from someware not sure ware now lol im always snaging things from so many dif people n places..smiles ~cheeky~
    Edited on Nov 14, 1:36 p.m. because 'rememberd where i snag the bckground it was Maatkara she has some butiful bckgrnds for snaggin xx'.


  • tawk gold member
    November 14, 2006
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    Beautiful and I love the roses, such a wonderful tribute to your ap mum. excellent


  • The Poetic Angel
    November 13, 2006
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    fanx u sissa ...i love my ap mum n i love all my ap family you all mean so much to me ....smiles ~cheeky~

  • The Poetic Angel
    November 13, 2006
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    fanx u SweetMaple you are so kind...smiles ~cheeky~

  • deleteit
    November 13, 2006

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    awwww sissa, this is great. Another wonderful write and pretty dedication to your AP mum


  • SweetMaple70
    November 13, 2006
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    Another winner Cheeky


  • The Poetic Angel
    November 13, 2006
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    famx u sis ...... yea she sure do mean a lot to me she makes me smile all time wif the things she says...smiles ~cheeky~


  • flyingphoenix
    November 13, 2006

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    nice poem sis, i'm sure that meant a lot to your AP mum! She must mean a lot to you

    take care!

    Webber


  • The Poetic Angel
    November 13, 2006
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    fanx u ... for the apluse n kind words..yea her sure ia a specil woman ..n im lucky i got her as me mum ....smiles ~cheeky~ xxxxx i love u sis


  • Dusty Rose
    November 13, 2006

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    beautiful

    This is so lovely sis..what nice dedication to your mum..it's wonderful that you have her... sounds like she is a special woman..

    much love
    Your sis
    Dusty


  • The Poetic Angel
    November 13, 2006
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    yw Mum and i feel honored to have you as my mum i love u so much ....smiles ~cheeky~ xxxxx


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 13, 2006

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    Awww Cheeky this is just beautiful I love you very much. Thank you! I feel most honoured.
    Mumx x

    Gaylene

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