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Fall away with words.

No one's born perfect.
                   We can try and we can pretend;

                               You're my muse.
I want to wake up to the sweet sound of your voice.



                               Let me taste your kiss.
Take me by the hand and fly me to a perfect world.
Lay with me...Wish with me.
                               We are perfection;
tightly held on to each other.
          Wrapped in a beautiful crystal case.

I want to have it all with you.
          I want to look in to your blue eyes;
See them sparkle.
                               Hear your laugh;
see your smile.

You are everything I've dreamed of.
                       run away.
Leave everything behind;
                                                    No regrets.



I want to fall asleep listening to the sound of your heart.
                             


                               I love you.

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I don't even know. I don't think it makes ANY sense whatsoever.. But I kinda like it. I tried to figure out a way to express how I feel for a certain someone.

I love you.
Written November 12th, 2006

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  • Ephemerality
    December 6, 2009
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    Well, love doesn't make much sense. =P Beautiful write, I liked it.


  • Desire gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    Holy Moly!!

    Wonderful piece penned
    and Miss Your presence here but wanted to leave
    my mark on Your verse

    Had to come back and digest Your words

    Hope all is well with You!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent with us!!

    Many blessings to You
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • --Cherry Bomb
    November 13, 2006
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    Thank you very much. It took me about an hour to write this. I had no idea how to word it properly.


  • Pain-is-all-I-Feel
    November 13, 2006
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    this is GREAT and it does make sense in a certain way, myabe i got that way or not, to you if it made sense is what counts but its really sweet!!!

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