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Pieces

He loved her
She held his soul

She loved him
He held her heart

Both a piece of each other
Together they were wholly beautiful
Apart there was always something missing

When she left him alone in this world
She took a piece of his heart with her

Now as he walks this earth
Day after day

He carries a piece of her

Keeping her alive
Keeping her love alive

Giving her hope to others
Giving her peace to others

Author notes

this poem is for my new dear friend Poet-of-the-shadows...this is for you and your "friend" i wrote this with the feelings you showed me so i guess it is as much yours as it is mine....i know no one could do her justice as you could but i tried i hope you enjoy it
Written November 12th, 2006

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  • Benji
    November 17, 2006
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    Touching

    Very powerful write... left me connected~Benji


  • Poet-of-the-shadows
    November 14, 2006
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  • LexieLost
    November 13, 2006
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    this was a nice short poem. I wish I ever felt this much love for or from someone. Nicely done.