Merry making moments passed mercilessly away,
Fading the feelings, fantasies faint’d!
Remind’d November rays of sunshine’s sway,
Every breeze brings elegant image paint’d!
Desperate soul sobb’d, doleful worries wink’d,
Millions of moments heart float’d, surge sunk,
Awesome clouds cloud’d oh with woe link’d
Thy absence took all frolics’ chunk!
Then came the day, D-day, yes sure,
Dismal was dejection, merry frame of mind,
Sugar of love in my eyes pour’d,
When in sheer frenzy, I did go blind!
Could never in life I forget the taste,
When we met after many many months,
She smil’d for me, she kiss’d me, yes……
How great was time, I couldn’t assess!!!!
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Written November 13th, 2006
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Thanks noble sister!
I am extremely thankful to you for your great favour of encouragement! -
Afarin to you
Bahi Zaidi
What in this piece was observable was love itself.. a power helping you flow it through your words to create something which is named “A Love Poem”. What is love? Is love a candle when it melts away and heaves a sigh? Or a butterfly when she place life on her palm and burns away in presence of her beloved (Candle)? Or maybe love is woe when it is painted with the color of joy!
The strange point is many people –not just poets- have talked about love. Love is love itself with its own attractions and pain of course.
Honestly a beautiful piece from a clever/lovely thoughts.
Thanks for sharing with us :-)
~Massy~
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WoW!
You have revealed the beauty of my simple poem with the help of your exquisite similes and pageant metaphors...You are so artistic and literary master dear sister!
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