Here is a cheer for your birthday
May your days be filled with strife
May you burn your lips while making a wish
May you cut your finger off with the knife
Here’s another cheer for your birthday
May your gifts be empty and fake
May the icing melt and become poison
And may you choke on the first piece of cake
Happy Birthday Asshole
Author notes
2) for someone you really hate for his behaviour
Written November 12th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Dark Birthday contest only for Partners in Crime by Partners In Crime.
300 points, ended November 30, 2006, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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entertaining
lmao that was really cool. I can see why this one did so well =]
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Thank you very much for the comment and applaud, I appreciate it
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haha i can't help but laugh...not in a bad way but god do i wish i could have said that to a lot of people. this was awesome!
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O M G. I totally loved this poem. I am so tired of reading poetry that is outlined and marred by over-happiness, where everything appears to be sugar coated. This was gold... pure gold! It's so demented and morbid.. It's my favorite =) reminds me of something from Poe.
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Eep!!
That would make for a bad bad birthday...
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Cool
I must have missed this one, very cute poem, i know a few people this would fit
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lol
yea, hehehehe I do too
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Congratulations !!
Congratulations on a well deserved Gold trophy
I couldn't resist reading this again because it's so funny and still dark.
Dee
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Thanks Catz, you're a sweetheart
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This is funny, Cotton The last line in each stanza are my favorites. They really make the poem A great job with this. Good luck in the contest
Dee
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funny
Oh my hell that had me laughing out loud! Hahahahaha I loved it. This is a great general dark b day wish. You think Halmark would be interested?
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Brilliant
I absolutely love this, gave me a giggle even though it is a dark write.
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I liked it a lot
The last line made me laugh real loud
And may you choke on your own piece of cake
Your ryhming is perfect as well as your wishes..hahaha
Thnxs for entering
XXJeannette
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