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Disappear

Your words cut
Like the sharpest knife
Unforgiving words
Degrading
Wounds you inflict that will never fade
My mind reels with self loathing
I'm useless
I retreat further into myself
The darkness of my soul
Around my being
I sink further away
Fading from view
So far away
That even if I cry out
Not one person would hear
Not that they would care
They would all agree with you
That I should disappear

Author notes

Ug, was in a crappy mood when I wrote this, so it's not as good as I thought it would be.  Oh well.
Written November 12th, 2006

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  • Anger Inside 201
    August 14, 2007

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    actually, it's not that bad. i rather like it actually! kinda sad, yes, but u do a good job putting the emotion in there!
    Anger Inside 201


  • Jane Speare
    June 8, 2007
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    is everything okay onee-sam?

  • Jane Speare
    November 13, 2006
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    good job onee-chan you rock

  • Dlvvanzor
    November 12, 2006
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    AH!!! I can't read the blue against the black! Well, I just highlighted it, but anyway, HI ALEXIAL!!! Good job!