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The break-up

For love was once before
but love would never follow
growth and change
   
While cheese can rot away
and animals die at young ages
the sticky papers full of love
are now replaced by darkest colours

and neither kisses nor hugs
are to be shared once more
because love is a wonder invention
but changing mind are much more common

I know my words are thoroughly useless
and you have to right to ignore, but

"I'm sorry
for my mind used to
love, but my heart tells
to move on"

Author notes

I broke up with my boyfriend last thursday.. and now he's pretending like I made a bit mistake to get me back.. but I didn't do anything wrong.. how to make him realize..?? (on second thought.. please answer!!)

It's kinda harsh to compare love notes with dying animals.. but, one way or another..

I'm sorry, OK, Gerjon! I do not like you anymore and I didn't do wrong to break up! NOW STOP MAKING ME FEEL GUILTY!

puhh.. that feels good.. sorry!

Enjoy..
Omichi
Written November 12th, 2006

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    November 19, 2006

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    Love is complicated as you show here.

    Hi Omichi,
    I liked to read your new poem, it's always hard when love is over...and you are right..don't let yourself being talked into a feeling of guilt.
    Its your life and your love you have to deal with...and a life you have one and maybe more love to come...
    Just follow your own heart...