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Torture

What did I do?
What did I do deserve this?
This torture
This pain
Stripped of my dignity
And punished
Ruthlessly
Heartlessly
Until I feel the pain no more
Until I become numb
Physically
Mentally
Tears rolling down my cheek
Hurt is merely a word
A syllable
A sound
Inadequate to describe the anguish I'm going through

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Written November 12th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • loveaswellashate
    November 17, 2006
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    I like this alot.. its a strong poem... good luck in my contest... ill be judgin soon....

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