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The Cruel Reality

How could the world be so cruel? To let the innocent be tainted,
For horrors to rule the earth, as if all the heroes and gods fainted,
How could we be so alone, left to fight our own battles, brutality,
Falling apart, torn at the seems, falling at this final view of reality,
The heartless, how did they develop? Begin in this once green bliss,
So much distorted, now even evil is sealed with a deceitful kiss,

My only wish, impossible, just to take the loved to a peaceful cloud,
Up high, safe away from this, where the wicked don’t stand proud,
Guarded, secure in a perfection that once existed and dissolved to dust,
Free from pain, war, violence, and death, mounted in a lasting distrust,  
Wings to fly us all away, strong enough to protect and hold you tight,
Till they’ve learnt their lesson, and we can live without this cruel fight.

Author notes

i wrote this a while ago, when one of my friends was seriously hurt by these guys, it was really hard for everyone to deal with, and she still hasn't gotten over it. i just wish people could feel safe whereever they are, but it's just not like that anymore... and it sucks.
Written November 12th, 2006

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  • Broken Machine
    December 20, 2006
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    Wow. That's an awesome poem! I'm sorry about what happened to your friend.


  • Drowning In Death
    November 14, 2006
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    FUCKING BRILLIANT AS ALWAYS!

    Lyns this is fucking awesome!

    And im glad to see you are posting again...

    Ive missed reading your fantastic writes

    I hope to keep seeing that barbie doll smile on your face and my heart around your neck

    Love you lynsey loser BANG BANG!

    xXx mwah! xXx