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Djembe

Missing image
A single tree upholds the world,
With all its melody and hum
Cacophonous, tattooed and knurled.
For clarity – hark to a drum!


Author notes

I was asked for a single quatrain for possible inclusion on a restored djembe. The above is what came instantly into my mind. The djembe is now in the New Orleans Museum of Art.

Photo of the djembe in the restorer's workshop [c] chordphrute.
Written November 12th, 2006

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  • Dalaney gold member
    April 1
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  • Adios Muchachos gold member
    February 12

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    If I were a drum, would you beat me?
    And if a chair?
    And if only a part, complete me?
    But I'm only a typo.

    They say if you stare at the drum long enough you will go mad. Well, not they, me.


  • intanglio2ring
    November 23, 2006

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    Dear Mairi,
    Very clever use of the "hum" - they do resonate - lingering in the mind also long after the deepest beat.
    Glad to be aware of your current project.
    Your barn-pot,
    Tangle


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 13, 2006
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    MA I hope you show it to him, and I hope he does like it, and understands it too. Thanks for the visit.

  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 13, 2006
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    {'high fives' Michael}
  • Mother Angst
    November 13, 2006
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    my 13 year old son, an aspiring drummer, would love this poem as much as i do, but for his own reasons. he loves percusion!
  • Eusebius
    November 13, 2006
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    Nifty...

  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 13, 2006
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    Bazza, did I say that? Struth!

  • Bazza silver member
    November 13, 2006
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    Now I know what you have been doing, how about something poetic ?? lol Sounds interesting and now I nkow why you call my work quait and 'agricultural' .....

  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 12, 2006
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    Thanks, Melodies. It came to me very quickly.

  • Melodies silver member
    November 12, 2006
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    How true and fine!

    Such a fine idea to meet the challenge of the request! I enjoyed seeing this a reading your quatrain. It is a noteworthy commentary on the majestic drum!
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