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Touch Me













Touch me,

just touch me....



 


The gentle graze of your hand along my cheek says so much.

A simple entwining of fingers leaves lasting memories

forever cherished. The sweet tenderness of your

lips brushing over my delicate skin with a

feather light grace sets my soul a

blaze. Your shimmering

sapphires, pierce me

to the core

revealing

the

vulnerability I

desperately try to hide.

Your words release my fears in

the most caring ways; and when I

fall apart you piece me back together again.

Both my wounded heart and tormented soul have

found comfort in the sanctuary that is you. And when

my mind is spiraling and lost in a fog of painful confusion

it still silently screams for the only thing that can bring it peace..



 

Touch me,

just touch me,

touch me

now...






















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For Blazing White Wolf
Written November 12th, 2006

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    June 11, 2007

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    This is just breathtaking thank you so much for sharing your beautiful masterpiece...This young man must be very pleased to have you care so much thank you kindly for sharing and entering


  • arafura gold member
    June 10, 2007

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    just touch me...

    Well your work touched me poet! Lovely construction and clever use of imagery!

    I like the ending!


  • tawk gold member
    February 28, 2007

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    Full of such passion and love. Such a sensual write. I so loved reading it. Excellent form and flow. Good luck in my contest


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 19, 2007

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    I think the lady wants touched folks! Seriously, this is beautifully done Bel. Full of longing, with a sensual touch and brazen gust of passion. I'm sure Michael loved this one Awesome job!


  • trista gold member
    February 16, 2007

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    I really loved the ending of this the most. It expresses so much passion and longing in just a few words. The form is beautiful as well. The poem is very hard to read, even when highlighting it...maybe you'd consider increasing the font size just a bit (unless it interferes with the form) and bolding the words as well? It's unfortunate, but I know a lot of people won't bother reading something if they have to highlight it, and it would be a shame for anyone to miss this lovely work. Congrats on the HM!

    Best wishes,
    ~J.


  • -Ink Artist-
    February 15, 2007

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    Gorgeous work! Left me almost breathless as I felt the power of the desire for touch. Your imagery portrays love as not only the emotional high, but also the physical. Very sensory. Beautiful artwork and presentation. My only complaint was difficulty in reading the font, had to highlight the text. Excellent write! Thanks for your entry and good luck!

    ~Lori


  • tawk gold member
    February 10, 2007

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    This is so beautiful and I loved the form! I so enjoyed reading your write. Good luck in the contest


  • EternalFyre
    January 26, 2007

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    Not only did I love the poem but I love the art work that goes with it. Good job! Good luck in the contest!


  • honey bear
    January 26, 2007

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    thank you for entering this very lovely poem and good luck in the contest,this is a very beautiful and loving write


  • SereneFelicity
    December 21, 2006

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    this is great!
    Its very interesting and I love the way you wrote it!
    It's really cool!
    Thanks 4 entering
    With love and hope in all you do ~ Fitz


  • Rachael70
    December 7, 2006
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    Umm Sensual...

    I was looking for the right word to comment on your piece, and in the end sensual was what I came up with. I must say I love the layout of this piece. It addes that little touch to the piece. Good luck in the contest.

    ~Majestic Poet

  • Paradise Prisoner
    November 19, 2006
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    lovely


  • Angel Crest
    November 12, 2006
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    Lost within the beauty of your words...
    That is where I am.
    A wonderful piece.
    Best wishes for the contest.


  • FaeryPixieFey
    November 12, 2006
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    What a s-w-e-e-t write!! You really captured love at its core.

    Smoosh...Flit...Flutter...and Whoosh away...FaeryPixieFey.

  • self expressions
    November 12, 2006
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    Beautiful poem- both content and form.


  • justrachael
    November 12, 2006
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    Wow! That is a great piece, now i know why it's featured! best of luck in the contest!

    Let's slit our wrists and burn down something beautiful!
    Love, Ray


  • Cannonsfire
    November 12, 2006
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    Another greatpiece Celtic and one that gave me shivers. You never fail to impress. Good luck


  • BeautifulCalamity08
    November 12, 2006
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    I am really in love with this piece..fantastic write! Really I am seriously in love with this piece...not only the words but the way it is shaped and WOW...truly enjoyed reading this piece my dear!

    Best of Luck in the Contest!

    With Words of Love and Hope,
    Lee-Ann


  • ShaShay
    November 12, 2006
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    WOW!!! I'm almost (but not quite) speechless. This is a beautiful piece and I can't see a thing to improve it.You captured feelings that usually have no words. I strive to accomplish that and seem to always come up a bit short. Congratulations on a piece well done.


  • November 12, 2006
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    sadly beautiful,and lovely. xxx


  • Gods child40 silver member
    November 12, 2006
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    EXCELLENT!!!

    very beautiful and so romantic, I really enjoyed it alot!!
    I can relate to this, I feel this way about my husband!!


  • luckynsincere
    November 12, 2006
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    Bel,
    This is beautiful. I love it so much!!! It is gorgeous.. the words.. the form of them ... it is lovely....
    -sighs- this is one of my favs by you. I know he loves it!!
    Mel


  • Blazes Air Angel
    November 12, 2006
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    oh my dad is the best!! but a huge dork!!


  • Blazing White Wolf
    November 12, 2006
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    Oh My sweet lioness what you trying to say I have mmagical fingers that reach deep??? Oh this is a bbeeautiful piece showing the love and heart of you. I am left without much to say except perfect in everyway Love you
    Love,
    Magical Fingers


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    November 12, 2006
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    Sis, this is an incredibly touching write. I really enjoyed this and wish you much luck in the contest.


    Lil Bro


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    November 12, 2006
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    Omigosh, Bel! Pardon me while I trip over my jaw as it dropped to the floor while reading this stunner of a write! Wow!
    If ever there was a piece that spoke one's heart and longing, this is the queen of them all!
    I AM left speechless! This is amazing, beautiful, awesome...everything that is top-notch!
    Thank you for sharing such an awesome piece!


  • Fire N Ice
    November 12, 2006
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    Fantastic

    Wow!!!! this is a truly amazing piece, loved it.. conveys such emotion and love, true talent lays right here before me and i thank you for sharing it.


  • Dalaney gold member
    November 12, 2006
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    A very nice poem
    to read on a Sunday
    morning. I enjoyed.
    Lane


  • less than a poet
    November 12, 2006
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    it is amazing a greatt write indeed full of sensuality can't help but applause and the pictures are well picked loved them


  • BluesMermaid
    November 12, 2006
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    Well in sensual means

    Ahh, the wordings in this piece has truely touched my soul deep!
    So much love-showing from a simple - yet meanningful- touch
    And don't forget about the wonderful way you have putten up the text! it makes the poem even more enjoyable to look at, rather than read also
    Tis is remarkable, darling =] keep up the good work


  • Ladylove1968
    November 12, 2006
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    Beautifully written. Also love the way it is displayed.


  • WhisperingSpirit
    November 12, 2006
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    Shooo remarkable.
    It is captivating from begning, to end.
    It touched me.
    Beautiful poem beautifully written


  • undertones
    November 12, 2006
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    gorgeous write, format is brilliant and nearly reads the poem for you. so well done, you have my applause.


  • Kari gold member
    November 12, 2006
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    sweet

    taha! I get it yall are writing a book somewhere?? Very well done again I love the format and the graphic. The best of luck to yall in the contest.
    Kari


  • Astral Lady
    November 12, 2006
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    Oooooh. This is so incredibly moving. The imagery is so powerful. I went on the journey with you from beginning to end. Thank you for this experience.

    I see the hour glass visual image as moving into the 'core' of you - the hidden vulnerability - and the further out one goes on both sides from the centre, the more 'open' and visible your emotions become. The two small 'circles' on either side of the hour glass are the keys, the solutions to healing the centre - your Master's touch. I may be wrong in my understanding of the structure of this piece! I probably am, as there will be as many interpretations as there are readers!

    Thank you so much for the gift of this write. I wish you well in the contest.

    Much love,

    Moira


  • Seductive Beauty
    November 12, 2006
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    EXQUISITE AND BEAUTIFUL!!

    I have to be honest I am almost speechless.. I really feel you are the best writer I have read on this site.. Your work is fantastic.. I am overcome by it.. So exquisite.. With life, love, passion etc.. Your mind flows like Heaven... WOW! Very very wonderful..
    HAVE A GREAT DAY!
    (SMILES),
    TANYA


  • PerVirtuous
    November 12, 2006
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    Intimate

    Fingers extended, your wish is my command. Ah, but it is not my touch you want. Then again, it wasn't my touch I was offering... You do not speak of love here, you speak of its magical twin intimacy, or love manifest in flesh. Well done! You certainly held my attention.

  • maheo
    November 12, 2006
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    I actually like this. I read so much that I do not care for on here, it is always refreshing to read something that I do. Nice job.

  • Cereus Opus
    November 12, 2006
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    10 outta 10

    great peice, well thought out , dynamic layout, i hungered to touch you, thru and thru. GREAT PIECE!!!, congradulations!!!


  • whispersoftly
    November 12, 2006
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    this is bautiful and sensual! a wonderful and touching write the way it is structured etc is visually impacting very well done this is fabulous! i love the way it flows and uses such descriptive language xx cheryl


  • knitonepearlone
    November 12, 2006
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    A striking write , the visual impact is immediate and speaks of deminishing confidence restored by the touch. Excellent use of imagery to articulate the depth of feeling you have for this person.

  • knitonepearlone
    November 12, 2006
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    A striking write , the visual impact is immetiate and speaks of deminishing confidence restored by the touch. Excellent use of imagery to articulate the depth of feeling you have for this person.

  • ocerus
    November 12, 2006
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    This is nice. I'm wondering if the words are meant to be shaped as an hourglass or wine glass? Either way, the effect is quite nice. - oce


  • nilav
    November 12, 2006
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    this can stir something in anybody-bringing the solace,hope and ecstacy of the soft loving touch


  • robert bolin
    November 12, 2006
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    An amazingly beautiful and breath taking write
    That stuns ya -- Thank you for allowing me to read and comment on your work..Best of luck in the contest..

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