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The Black Mirror



The Black Mirror


Sitting looking into my mirror by candlelight.
Wondering what I was to see this time.
I see a face but not of one I know,
This one was only a kind of shadow.


He said that there had been one sent with the keys.
To open the gates and let out the old ones.
For they had been lock up many a year.
And they were told that they would be let lose,


Upon mankind for a short time.
Mankind has brought this upon himself.
For one was sent to save them.
Yet most of mankind turned their back on him.


So now the time of the old ones is coming.
For the time of judgement is at hand.
Everyone and everything will be judge,
According to there own heart.


So my question to all is where do you stand?
On which side will you be?

 

(c) Rose Patrick May 6, 2003
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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    September 13, 2003
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    Scrying mirrors are wonderous tools to use, they show all should you ask the right things and always shows what it is we NEED to see. I'm quite fond of that method myself This is a great piece very profound and informative in both what is said and what is not said. Excellent write Blessed be my friend


  • May 23, 2003
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    this is a very powerful piece,
    that picture is amazing, and gives me shivers.
    a very good point made in this.

    ,,,=^..^=,,, Clare


  • Sherry gold member
    May 8, 2003
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    Intense stuff but needed message that picture would give someone nightmears true we all need salvation and to be with Jesus I hope and do pray I go for that is where I desire to be.....Sherry

  • angel tears
    May 8, 2003
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    Very good write. The picture is super cool. I loved the angle you took to the end times, awesome and inspiring.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 7, 2003
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    excellent

    A very thought provoking piece indeed, I loved the rhyme in this too, a excellent write, makes ya think for sure.

    The pic and background went well also!
    Thanks for sharing and God bless!

    -Timothy


  • May 6, 2003
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    A very interesting and powerful write- full of images. Thanks for sharing. Freeways Mom


  • Jonathan Wikkins silver member
    May 6, 2003
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    good one!
    yes, the mirror can show us many things, some we want to see, others we don't...
    blessed be

  • Madriar
    May 6, 2003
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    cool beans!

    wow! this is powerful! You really get your message across. I love the first line about the mirror! Keep writing!

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