I'm bleeding
It's real this time
I'm not pretending to cut anymore
I did it
The blood is oozing
Did I hit a vein?
Maybe I did
So what,
Who cares
You certainly don't
We once cut together
We used to be like a jigsaw
The same yet different
But you changed
You got rid of the scissors
You got rid of the pain
You got rid of me too
You should have told me before you did
You should have warned me you were leaving
I keep going deeper now
Don't tell me to stop
It's my life
It's my pain
You were the one who forgot
Leave me alone
Let me die
I'm darker than you know
My soul is as black as midnight
You let the light in
But light burns me
So I am with the darkness
We sing and dance and cry
You may not join us now
We cut despite the lies
Darkness is my friend
You are with the enemy
Give me a break
It's time I set myself free
You don't care
I am alone again
I'm insane with the pain
Time to say a proper farewell
This time I'm not coming back
I'm joining the dark forever
We'll laugh at you again
Screw this world, we're not together
Time I joined the dark side
I'll do it alone
You can have your colours and your life
I'll take my black and my knife
Author notes
ok um dis hasn't happened to me yet, i'm pretty happy wit da bf i got at da moment. lol. but i wrote it so i may as well publish it.
Written November 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- Black and white....................... by Starswhispers.
500 points, ended February 15, 2007, 20 entries
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It is very difficult for me to relate to those experiences I see only the darkness in it and no light at the opposite I hope for you that you can value yourself and your life strongly enough never to try what you express in your poem. I had asked as well "no swearing" there are enough words in the English language to use without having to use swear one.
It is over all a well written poem with interesting imagery and symbolism, I can see lot of potential in your writing and many emotions waiting to be expressed.
Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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