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Would You

Would you

Would you cry,
If I were to die?

Would you

Would you see my face
As you moved from place to place?

Would you

Would you die a little inside
Knowing that you had pushed me aside?

Would you

Would you care at all
If I were to fall?

Would you

Would you notice me
Or are you too blind to see?

Would you

Would you even know
How it is I sunk so low?

Would you?

No, you wouldn’t.

Author notes

Well not that I'm emo in the literal sense but my thoughts can be rather morbid if I want them to be. its sort of a talent of mine to be able to think like a depressed or psychotic person then switch right back...anyways I wrote this after going into an emo thought process which oddly enough was brought on after watching an episode of Naruto. Wrll I hope you enjoy the poem at any rate.
Written November 11th, 2006

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  • msjct06
    November 11, 2006
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    i like this...i really like your ending especially...short and sweet and right to the point! yaya!


  • Kari gold member
    November 11, 2006
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    unique

    This is very deep..sometimes you do wonder aboout people. Anyway very good job. TV can bring some good stuff out. Thanks for sharing.
    Kari