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day dream to night mare



i gaze out my window

not really looking at anything

day dreams run through my mind

deep sacred thought are relieled

to myself

and no one else

is it a dream

or is it real

i wonder

what is reality

the tears and pain

that we shed thru life

or smiles and sunsets

that whisk us away

as i am no

gazing out my window

i hear your voice call

my world transforms

from day dream to nightmare

am i back to reality

or am i lost forever

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i unno im depressed
Written November 11th, 2006

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  • Mrs. Serial Killa
    November 22, 2006

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    This is excellent!!!! I dont know how to describe my emotion for this poem, but i know the emotion in it, is very strong GREAT JOB!!!


  • MidniteRae
    November 11, 2006
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    i feel the exact same way. Great poem. I can really relate to it. Keep up the good work.
    love always and forever, midnite rae
    aka:marissa rae