i gaze out my window
not really looking at anything
day dreams run through my mind
deep sacred thought are relieled
to myself
and no one else
is it a dream
or is it real
i wonder
what is reality
the tears and pain
that we shed thru life
or smiles and sunsets
that whisk us away
as i am no
gazing out my window
i hear your voice call
my world transforms
from day dream to nightmare
am i back to reality
or am i lost forever
Author notes
i unno im depressed
Written November 11th, 2006
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This is excellent!!!! I dont know how to describe my emotion for this poem, but i know the emotion in it, is very strong GREAT JOB!!!


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i feel the exact same way. Great poem. I can really relate to it. Keep up the good work.
love always and forever, midnite rae
aka:marissa rae


