This is NOT a love poem!
For love may not be the best word
To describe the way I feel for you.
How I want you to have everything
Your every desire in the whole world.
You desire me? I see, how sweet
Love me? Oh, well then, that's interesting.
Love you? No my dear I'm terribly sorry
This is not love I feel for you.
You're the reason I bother waking up
And going about my morning.
You're the reason I don't give up
And you make sure my day isn't boring.
But love? oh no, a feeling I won't show.
I have fun with you and laugh with you
Spending hours just me and you.
I can't spend a moment away from you
...This might just be a love poem.
Author notes
Awesome contest, I have to say I absolutely love it and even if I do not win I think I am really proud of the work I have submitted. Great contest, one of the best I've see here on AP.
Cassie
Written November 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- This is NOT a love poem! by Celticjedi.
300 points, ended November 16, 2006, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow, great job on this one. The ending is wonderful even though you say at the beginning that this is not a love poem. It's almost as if you started writing this and by the end you realized how much you loved this person.
Wonderfully done!
Always
Molli
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Very good
I especially like the second stanza of this poem. I like the way that you asked a lot of questions and then answered them straight away. It sounds like the person speaking the poem is trying to convince themself more than convice the person that they're reciting the poem too. Very good. -
Whee! Great piece!!! Haven't read something like this well... ever.
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