This leaf
Used to be
Subdued
And green
It had a sort of
Plant midlife crisis
And in one last thrill
Before it dies
It bursts into color
Wild and true
Jumps free from its
Lofty bondage
And flies
Author notes
I am 12 years old. I chose Option #1.
Written November 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- Ages 12 and Under - Autumn/Winter! by riasme.
600 points, ended November 15, 2006, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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A wonderfully vivid picture painted by your words, Has a hint of solemnity and the undertones of Child like fun. Very good use of such short and simple words, adds to the effect of the whole piece. Very well put, Great write
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Oooh, Nature
This is a pretty nature poem. I think you have described the falling of a dead leaf in a unique way. (It doesn't fall, it flies. Maybe one day a leaf will finally escape). Heh, "plant midlife crisis." -
this is wonderful! I can just see it happening in my head!
thank you so much for entering. great job 
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