thought about the world
and little fragments of poetryandprose too eroded to
be recycled
and hell no, not mirrors, that’s too, too, way too much
what a cliché, fairest one of them all [ hold me ]
no sh*t, Sherlock
as smart as Einstein with your complex carbohydrates
& crystal calculations
and oh
no
lost my contact ((lens)) ground control can’t find me
with a cast gold anchor that is scraping fathomless dreams
no need for carved bronze idols
when we’re all worshipping reaper rock gods instead;
at least as we sing their praises
they can bellow our pain
[ fuck’s sake go scream in a field or something
where it’s flaxen and barren and no one can hear you ]
caked in eyeliner and scrubbed clementine clean with baby soft kisses
lips are toxic and teeth are wobbly
maybe we’ll barter and they’ll give us a good
price
thrashing and chanting and comatose
no blood
greedy hands run up and down my thighs [ thistle-thoughts ] and pallid neck
cause collarbones jut and we used up the glitter.
stars burn.
trucks crash.
people fade.
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it’s really not that wonderful.
thought about the world
[ in monochrome ]
but honey it was a fruitless search for value
nothing beautiful in this
charcoal-choked
carbon-clottedHAZARDOUS part of town.
Author notes
this is
pointless
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Written November 11th, 2006
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oh hun i doubt it was pointless.
it held a great iron structure.
"it’s really not that wonderful."
i so agree ha.. when is something wonderful. i think your wonderful
OH and dude.. you are the shit. i thought i was the only one who used the phrase "no shit sherlock" hahahaha!
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the clappy men.♥♥
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"and little fragments of poetryandprose too eroded to
be recycled"
"stars burn.
trucks crash.
people fade"
"and we used up the glitter"
This is so wonderful.
All Of it.
&& Fuuuuck I love this.
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That was really good. I rarely see any writers in 13-15 range who write as good as you. Well it's hard to find good writers in general.
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amazing... i luff you, hope ure ok xxxxx
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I'm amamazed
The images are outstanding
Your veiws are too
You epressed so meny emotions
Perfectly placed and in such an amazing way
Well done
Very well done -
yes. it. is. all. of. it.
I applaude.
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