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A wonderful Sis

You are just in your twenties

Yet you've accomplished so very much

Tops in you class at college

You took home grand awards




You have alway stood out, above the rest

A wonderful person, a wonderful sis

But unlike others

Your journeys not complete




You still give of yourself

Though you have nothing left to prove

Your still a shining light

In a world that's grown dim




Your a teacher

A student of the world

You give back

While others only take

 

It's no wonder

God is smiling down on you

Because you still stand

For what's great in all of us


Author notes

I hope she like this
Written November 11th, 2006

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  • jasminerose
    November 14, 2006
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    Hi Cjharlie, this is a wonderful sweet birthday wish!!! I loved the ending and the uplifting feeling of knowing there are still people out there that make a difference with thier lives!
    Excellent write!
    Linda


  • GlimpseOfPerfection
    November 14, 2006
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    very beautiful,

    "Because you still stand
    For what's great in all of us"

    loved the ending


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    November 13, 2006
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    A very nice birthday tribute to a loving sister, your pride for her shines through. Dolores


  • Sandygram silver member
    November 13, 2006
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    BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    AH!!! Charlie Such a sweet birthday wish. I am sure this will bring a smile to her. Something you do quite well my friend. Make people smile. . This was lovely. Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day. Blessings to you. Sandy


  • Gwenevere
    November 12, 2006
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    These are wonderful words of encouragement which I am sur wil be appreiated, Ros


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 11, 2006
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    Happy Brithday to a Wonderful Human!

    Charlie- This is the nicest birthday blessing I've ever seen!! I would also like to say, Happy Brithday to a Wonderful Lady!!!!
    Cheers - Rose of Ireland
    Edited on Nov 11, 2:35 p.m. because ''.

  • June-bug
    November 11, 2006
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    excellent

    Charlie this is very sweet, I am sure that the one it is intended for will enjoy it. I enjoyed reading of such a special person.


  • Rita Krocha
    November 11, 2006
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    Hey, thanks for the lovely entry.M sure she'll be delighted reading it.Best of luck

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