*
even
when you
sleep
I am
loving you
reading
your
words
and caressing
the
thought
of you
deep in my
heart
as you
sleep
*
Author notes
Just a few words for my love when she wakes
Written November 11th, 2006
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Aurelia, thank you for liking my writing. This is not typicle of my style but more an experment. Try "Forever and a Day" on my last page, a personel favorite. You need not Applaud, Just read, Rick
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i love the form of your work, Rick, its very emotive without being at all overblown, which can be difficulf in blank verse love poems. love it!
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June, thank you for your blessing, Rick
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Finally I hear from my wife. No writing is complete till I hear your thoughts, that is just how it is.
One of the wonderfull effects of speaking in few words, is it isolates the thought, and makes it stand above the page, almost alone.
Love Ya, Rick -
Lane, I found someone very special and as a bonus, she is a poet.
How lovely is that for a guy like me.
Wish me well, I am gladly falling as far as I may in faith.
Thank you for reading me words, Rick -
excellent
extremely touching beautiful write, I see your love enjoyed it. God bless both of you. Thanks for sharing -
Hey Rick,
Just to let you know I finally made it here to give this a read. Lovely thoughts as always, and I can see it touched Joyce very much.
I could never find such an economy of words myself. lol
Much love,
~J. -
How wonderful to see
love has inspired
this poetry...Very
well done, and I
am happy for you.
Lane
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Mooninmysky, thank you for reading and saying Beautifull, Rick
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So sweet! Your words of love are beautiful!
Lovely,
Molli
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Autumn, What a wonderfull comment, a poem for me. I am honered.
Like the words said here, How nice, Rick -
Sleeping beauty rests tonight,
feeling no pain or bitter plight,
words on the winds of loving prose,
In his heart, he knows, she knows!
Like I said definately the kings of kings
where love, romance and women are concerned.
Who want to hear all your endearing love lines
Thanks for the treat! Autumn
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Reading what you said again, just for fun, Rick
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This is how it realy is My Joyce, just as you said
"I am loved by you
every moment, of every second, of minute,
of every hour, of every day and night,
of every week, of every month, of every year.
And as the years go by, you'll love me for a life time".
"Remember we once said after death,
we'll meet back here and love again".
Put me down for always please...
Your, Richard Lee
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AMAZING !!!
Babe
What a wonderful way to wake this morning,
words of love.
From my love, i guess you know that as I type
this message to you, I have the biggest smile
upon my face.
From beginning to end and every word in between
is purely lovely.
deep in my
heart
as you
sleep
Now if that's true then I am loved by you
every moment, of every second, of minute,
of every hour, of every day and night,
of every week, of every month, of every year.
And as the years go by, you'll love me for a life time.
Remember we once said after death,
we'll meet back here and love again.
thank you so much for this beautiful gift of poetry.
Joyce
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Mwestcar, I loved your comment on this writing,
"Beautiful in the pure spirit of love"
For that I thank you,
Rick
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Indeed, your lady love is blessed to wake up to such lovely words. Thank you for sharing, it was a nice way to start my day as well! Beautiful in the pure spirit of love.
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Thank you for saying I have changed your day, that is sweet, Rick
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Mel, thank you for your flatering comment to me. We are both lucky
Rick -
Thank you Terry, I hope she feels just as you said, Rick
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That pureness of spirit and love is inspiring..... truly soul felt thank you for asking me to read this.. you have changed my day Kx
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Beautiful! Sweet!
So finely presented and appreciated by all who delight in words of love.
Yes, lucky girl, indeed! We might all fantasize and hope to be the one. 
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Oh Rick, this is simply adorable...so beautiful....such a lucky girl to wake up to these beautiful words....she will be blessed...smiles, Terry
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Thank you Angel, the words came to me as I read her words
Rick -
A very sweet and loving write, my friend! I'm sure your lady love will cherish this throughout her day! Thank you for sharing
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Thank you for saying "Amazing"
Rather a coindence, I rate poems @4 levels
GOOD
VERY GOOD
EXCELLENT
AMAZING
If I can not say one of the four, I say nothing
In 1752 comments, I personally have used Amazing seven times
Even my work is not worthy
Rick
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amazing
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