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our love

our souls were instantly connected
it was great but so unexpected
it was like a big lighting bolt that just suddenly hit
suddenly we both there wanting each other to commit
when i saw him it was like seeing Christmas for the fist time
or here that chime
our love is so unique
when i first realised he felt the same i couldn't speak

Author notes

something a bit different to what i usally write
Written November 11th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • gingleberry
    February 15, 2007
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    Another one about Ant, im happy you're happy. Really.
    Nice work.
    This when you found out he liked you back?
    it was like a big lighting bolt that just suddenly hit
    suddenly we both there wanting each other to commit
    Well done Nikki, in a non patronzing way.

    Berry.

  • Thedragonisgone
    November 11, 2006
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    Ah, just like christmas wrapped up in a bow -- lovely feeling...
    commitment for women is such an aphrodisiac isn't it?? well, for some women.
    this was short and sweet - I like brevity.
    being speechless - I remember when that happened to me.
    a very relateable piece.
    best of luck in the contest.