EMBRACE
My heart will always be yours to embrace,
Forever for you to love,
When the sun shines brightly I will be there,
For you to have in loving care,
When darkness falls and you close your eyes,
I'll be there close as breath,
You'll feel me near in shadow form,
Watching you close your eyes,
You'll feel my kiss and my light touch upon your face,
You'll reach out, I'll touch your hand,
I see a small tear upon your face,
Remember darling, I am always in your embrace.
Author notes
I wrote this thinking what it could feel like when you have lost someone you love.
Written November 11th, 2006
A contest entry
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400 points, ended September 6, 2008, 12 entries
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Gifts
The embrace was felt and the love was pure---What a pleasure to read -
Nicely written. Thanks for sharing this lovely little poem. Thanks for joining my contest.
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beautiful
Very very good Daisy - you certainly have a way with words - right from the heart - only comment I'm gonna make on this one is WOW !!!!! - Bless God - Joe -
Beautiful piece of writing
Beautiful piece of writing here. I love this. The words are very very delicate and speak of undying love. Full of emotion in this. -
Lovely
Daisy this poems is lovely.......So true in many respect for all you lost a love....You are so gifted hope to see more of your poems soon..........ML
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