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Body Shots




Masterful sapphires glow with
sinful delight as visions of

olive and ivory tones lay exposed and waiting. Honey

colored golden locks inter-mingle with burgundy

kissed chestnut strands upon the plush

satin pillows soon to be drenched

with sweet passion's release.



Four wrists become rooted securely beneath mirrored

skies as His dominating digits masquerade over

tender servile flesh. Longing whimpers slip

through parched lips as delicate black

silk finds refuge upon orbs of

unconditional adoration.

Caramel peaks

pay homage to brushes

strokes applied by His heated

breath as He inhales trust's essence.

His jaws ache with hunger as He admires

the full course meal laid out before Him in a buffet

 of total submission. Venomous injections of

 blazing desire from His slithering

tongue cause twin vessels to

 writhe in need.

Granulated sprinkles are strategically placed

 along moistened paths of fevered flesh.

Sliced citrus journeys over celestial

olive and ivory tones reaching

destiny palace to rest

between complying

lips.

Grinning in sweet pleasure as the splashing of cool liquid

cause shivers to grow more evident. His wanting lips

envelop drowning navels, devouring the love and

trust combined within His submissive

banquet. Slowly He indulges in

 the salt sprinkled path that

has been drawn out

over irresistibly

yearning

 bodies.

His destination is delicately founded upon

intoxicating lips bathed in citrus; as

 a night of passionate submission

is complete with kisses

of utter appreciation.





Author notes

For Blazing White Wolf and luckynsincere


Written November 10th, 2006

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  • Dorcha Runda
    January 20, 2007

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    wow, this was interesting. the words are great along with the feelings you put into them. thanks for entering and good luck

  • loversenvy
    December 12, 2006
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    mhh spicyyy

    i love it.


  • greyhaime
    November 18, 2006
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    well done ,
    good luck to you in the challenge,,,

    Krystal


  • Seductive Beauty
    November 12, 2006
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    AMAZING AND SENSATIONAL!!

    I was amazed I never read an erotic piece such as this...It is fabulous.. I really love your work.. It is beautiful, loving, and very sexy.. Your wording is astounding.. The images fly to you.. Dances in your mind.. I am quite impressed.. You are a marvelous writer.. SENSATIONAL..
    THANKS,
    (SMILES),
    TANYA


  • TwistedBloodyLilly silver member
    November 12, 2006
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    perfection

    I love the format and, of course, the picture. You have a great control of language, carefully cultivating each section to the point where this piece almost has it's own soul. Very nicely done! Best wishes for your future, Lady Lilly


  • xXx W1ck3D xXx
    November 11, 2006
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    Awesome job... This is a really good write. I loved the visuals you gave with your words. HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!!! It was enough to make me ache with wanting. Great JOB ~ Good Luck in the contest.

    W1ck3d


  • Jadestone Doll
    November 11, 2006
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    This siunds very delicious
    Thanks for sharing!


  • Kari gold member
    November 11, 2006
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    Hot

    oh woah I am so impressed with your writes. I'm trying to get better at sensual writes..I think you've mastered the trick of writing sensual..very very very well done. The best of luck to you in the contest.
    Kari


  • Celticmoon
    November 11, 2006
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    I just read it last night and chalked it up to someone who either can't write it or someone that just doesn't understand. Either way it was funny but not worth my time or effort


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 11, 2006
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    Well my first thought, was anyone that writes erotica is into cyber self pleasure only...there must be one hell of a lonely group of people out there. Makes me wonder what he thinks of erotic novels. Or perhaps Playboy, penthouse, and all the others. The comment just cracked me up this morning.


  • Sunkissedrose
    November 11, 2006
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    Well I for one find this piece sensual and exciting. I to will never look at Tequila the same way...gives new meaning to Lick It Slam It Suck it in a sense. Excellent write as always.

    ~Carrie

  • Celticmoon
    November 11, 2006
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    LMAO........I wasn't even going to justfy the first commentor with a response but I love yours.....hehe


    Just too perfect and I couldn't agree with you more!!!!


  • Celticmoon
    November 11, 2006
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  • Blazing White Wolf
    November 11, 2006
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    ~goes out and stocks up on Jose, limes, and salt! Buys two plane tickets, and windixs mirrored sky~ Ok My lioness E-tickets left for you and our lil fay oh a very sensual and hot piece like words traced in water with a stick so graceful and deeply alluring thanks sweetie
    Love,
    The One written for , Master
    Edited on Nov 11, 11:06 because ''.


  • ckwriter69
    November 11, 2006
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    Nicely done. I love teguila and the picture is very inviting. I liked the format you used to lay out your words. Very sensual and erotic. Keep them cumming and thanks for sharing.
    CK


  • Desire gold member
    November 11, 2006
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    Wow-

    Excellent use of words to bring the reader~There
    -takes out video camera-
    (just a formality)

    Way to go Bel
    This leaves me wanting a stiff drink

    Thank You for sharing Your talent~
    A Masterpiece to inhale and exhale with Sensuality
    dripping from the lips~

    Best wishes to You in this contest~
    (Though You don't need it- )
    -eyes blinded from the shiny trophy-

    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • tanzanite
    November 11, 2006
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    This is an awesome piece and your imagery makes the encounter between Dom and sub something sensual and romantic and beautiful. Newsflash:::: this is the way it is most times and you have done well to show others this picture that is so true to life as a sub and Dom ... mmmm .... where is my protocol??? I thought this was great. As for cybersex with oneself? Hmmm definitely he/she does not have a clue!!!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 11, 2006
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    I here will make two comments...
    Please excuse the first one...

    HOLY SHIT! cybersex with onself? Someone needs to get laid!!! (to the first commenter)

    Now, damn!! Now this makes body shots sound really yummy. This was just oh so hot and definitely tantalizing. Nice read first thing in the morning. I need to climb back in bed and feel warm again, lol. Wow, excellent.

    Thanks for entering and good luck
    Storm

  • Celticmoon
    November 11, 2006
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    Well first of all this is not a prewrite. Now as for the number of line I admit I did not notice that thee was a max line requirement. Unfortunately, I will have to withdraw then because I refuse to chane and alter my piece as it would only take away from it and I won't do that.

    Oh well....


  • Erotik Rose silver member
    November 11, 2006
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    WOW.........I don't think I will ever be able to drink tequila without this vision (but then agian that might be a good thing)
    very good poem, and I love the picture.


    Edited on Nov 11, 7:32 because ''.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    November 11, 2006
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    Very sensual and seductive, sweetie! Ultra passionate! Glad to see you found your muse!
    All the best to you...always
    Sandy


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    November 11, 2006
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    Well Sis, this is certainly a very wonderful piece and I am very much pleased that you were able to find that muse of yours and enter my challenge.


    Lil Bro


  • Astral Lady
    November 11, 2006
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    This is a wonderfully sensual, erotic write. Just a question about the number of lines and the pre-write requirements??

    I really love it. Good luck in the contest.

    Moira


  • tomisb
    November 11, 2006
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    There are vivid sensuous images painted with the pen. The writer verges upon voluptuous visions that become interupted by the need to tell the story of conquest. This friction between the erotic and the visionary inhibits my pleasure in the piece. Still a very nice effort to paint an almost Arabian Nights vision of a Dom with his Submissive. Love, Tom B.


  • soulfultia gold member
    November 11, 2006
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    good

    A sensual and erotic write. The visual display of the write was intriguing and inviting to the write. I think you did a nice job of painting a vivid picture without being crass. Not a usual write I am drawn to, but I believe you did a nice job on this without overdoing it! Good work, and good luck in the contest, I think you might have something shiney coming your way ~Tia


  • MotorcycleFreak silver member
    November 11, 2006
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    As these types of poems go, the imagery is very cute, and seems to compliment the overheated passion the writer emplies with well chosen word choices. These types of poems always bore me, because they seem to be cybersex with one's self, kind of like cyber solitaire. Poets sitting around writing about sexual fantasy. It seems to be popular though. Great Write. ~PeacE~GarY~

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