A sleeping and peaceful fire-
wrapped all around himself,
gathering strength to fire up!
Light through life, innocently-
without a curse or a sin,
to garden truth afterwards!
It is all in mother's hand-
her nourishment, her teachings,
and purity of her breast milk!
Way her warmth melts lined palms-
whether they drains in hell or,
fly towards the skies of proud!
Future is water of agone ages-
teach him a control over fire,
to prevent explosions tomorrow!
So, food is just ready to eat-
just nutrients preserved, but,
germs inside are burnt away!
It is high time, direct seas-
cut into a million streams,
to prevent flood, but use it!
So, swim in it, to go through-
cross dark ends, to gates of,
satisfied, joyous silence!
Author notes
Written November 10th, 2006
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This is a gorgeous piece, you left me to ponder many a thought with this one. Best to you dear Bandit.
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WOW!! This is a splendid write..it caresses the heart so gently and leaves an imprint and a silent feel in the heart! Such lovely use of words make me appreciate this very very much!! Loved it!
Glad i read this..it makes me feel beautiful at heart
love n peace
pri
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Bandits Unite
What a soft and gentle piece. Beautiful imagery and metaphors. Love the use of the word 'fire' in the first line... They are like little embers. Warm, delicate... But grow to be a big and magnificent thing
. Beautifully wrote. Well done!
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Great...
This is lovely indeed... Great little picture, nice flow of words... very profound and full of hope, love and adulation for the innocent creatures. Loads of creativity. Loved this work...
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Bandits United!
Awww...what a GORGEOUS photo...is the baby yours?
The love shines through in this beautifully written piece. I can see where you are going with your interesting imagery, and since English is not your first language, you have done an extraordinary job of putting across your meanings so well.
Absolutely delightful. Very well done!
Keep up the great work..
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Bandits United!!
Wow!! What a Precious piece penned and many blessings felt throughout this verse
Thank You for sharing this Gift-Gem!!
Beautiful baby!!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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BANDITS UNITED!
I quite like this one, indeed! You manage to capture the wonder of life in this one. I love the boarder, as well. It is just SO cute!
Well done!
Burmina
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Bandits United - this is your day in the spotlight. What a cute poem this is - so clean, such a wonder children are, and it all depends on how they are brought up as to what will become of them. So important to raise them well.
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BANDITS UNITED!!
Babies can be some of the most inspirational beings on earth. There is nothing that can match their innocent inquisitiveness...if that's even a word You've done a wonderful job of capturing the essence of infant in these lines. >pixxie<
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BANDITS UNITED!!!
Nothing can beat the innocence of an infant, his beauty and potential immortalized in poetry
A sleeping child is the epitome of innocense. We look at our sleeping children, even as they get older, and they're s sweet laying there in all of that innocense, we reflect on the hours he was awake, the mischief making, the rambunctous fun, the frustration and we wonder if it's the same child we're seeing there sleeping so peacefully.
This is a wonderful poem, and so right on. How a child is brought up is so important to their future. Everything starts at home
Great job with this magical piece
Dee
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BANDITS UNITED
You capture the sleeping baby. A baby sleeps so peaceful. Very nice imagery in your words. One could feel the love coming out of your words. Joyous silence is a fine way to end your write.
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Bandits United
Light through life, innocently-
without a curse or a sin,
to garden truth afterwards!
Wonderfull words
Rick
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Bandits United!
Ahhhhhhhh, tht was such a sweet write. hard to beat one on infants no? Shows great love and adoration, very nice. bravo
JD and DK
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BaNdiTS UniTEd
The people in this room saw the picture of the baby on my 'puter screen and said, "CUTE!!!" And your poem is very smart! What a clever poem this is! 
Many truths here...
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Bandits United!!!!!!
Lovely piece with great imagry and flow. Liked the stages of development and the soft emotion you infused in this piece. Great work. Hugs, Bunny
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BANDITS UNITED !! *grin*
A very unique and wonderful pice full of thoughtful andbeautiful imagery. I find this piece gives me a pleasant trip through my own children's infancies and makes me look at them to see what control I have relayed to them. Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *
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Well Done
This is such a beautiful poem. I like the way you described each step of growth a baby has to take to grow up. Keep up the awesome poetry!!! -
this is a peaceful piece.... Resting babies, children is the best thing to watch... Watching them dream, the smile on their faces.. pure joy.
Yvonne
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Beautiful
This is a very beautiful poem. You spoke quite well and the imagery was enchanting. I really liked this poem, you write very well. And the photo just added to the beauty of the whole poem.
Have a dreamy day,
~*Blushful Lie*~
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