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Eine Kleine Nachtmusik

She sleeps not well when music's strains are stilled;
they lull her, sooth her and soft breathing bring.
Musicians play and shrill sopranos sing
whilst, calmed, she's unaware of anything.

In bed she sleeps - orchestras softly play —
their subdued sound, she says, her fears allay.
The all-night radio gives to her the choice
of sleeping through the viol or the voice.

In still of night, to listeners who 're awake,
her snores at times with soft-toned music vie;
a contrapuntal discord form they take 
and normal orchestration they deny.

And thus she sleeps, content from night to night,
and claims that music is her great delight.

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Option #5 Music

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  • Shrat
    July 30, 2008

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    I love it! It rhymes, and flows with a musical quality. And it is beautiful. It shows that music really is important to us. I cant think of anything you could change to make this better. Great job!


    • Shenton silver member
      July 30, 2008
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      Shrat

      Thankyou. Your comments and award are vey much appreciated.

      Best wishes from 'down-uder'.

      Shenton