The tips of my fingers kissed your cheek- So softly.
You smiled.
I loved you.
You left me.
The tears in my eyes cried "I need you"- So Loudly.
You tried.
I loved you.
You left me.
A tune in my flute-heart sang "I love you"- So mellow.
You lied.
I love you.
You left me.
Author notes
Written November 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- Options! YAY! by ConvenientExcuses.
500 points, ended November 10, 2006, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
-
good
wow thats a good write! its just.. it gave me chills. its the kind that i want to read over and over again! i really like the format its realyl different, but it still workes and i LOVE the flow. once again, its different, and yet... it still amazes me! good write and keep writing!
Kat -
I know exactly how you feel. I love this poem. I love the way you set it up...it shows a lot of emotion in such few words. great job! thank you for entering and good luck! the only thing I ask is that you put the option number in your authors box.
*ConvenientExcuses*
Adding your comment:
