B ehold me, my love
l ust eagers me so
u nder your skin I wish to be
E asy on me, darling
I cy-blue eyes of yours are all I see
S ymbolized in the goddess of darkness,
I only see the light that shines through you
S eemingly impossible, but tis is true
Q uickly running to you, I always seem to do
u nwary of your wrath,
e ars on your chest I listen to your beats
E ndangered with this forbidden love,
N ever wanting to let go of it
A round you I go,
V ery close to you I stay
A nxious to see you always
R ampage my love,
u ntold promises will be revealed
S oon my love, I shall be near
Author notes
Chose the acrostic option =]
allpoetry.com/poets/BlueIsisQueenAvarus
Written November 10th, 2006
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A contest entry
- BATTLE OF THE SEXES - ROUND 4 - Write a tribute to one of your AP favourites (PREWRITES NOW ALLOWED) by SarahD.
410 points, ended December 1, 2006, 23 entries
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Simply divine!!
My darling...this was most breathtaking. Thank you for the honor. I adored how you worked with this. And the words you brought to surface. What pictures and feelings they envoked. You have my heart...and my soul.
Lady BlueIsisQueenAvarus~ -
Ahsant
Beautiful my dear. I’m no good at acrostic. To tell you the truth, it more fasten my fancy to write but I see you didn’t had that problem.
A beautiful thought from your hand. Thanks for sharing and all the best with the contest :-)
~Massy~
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hmm you forgot doesnt fight...
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Thanks for your entry to our contest! Please remember rule 5! Not sure why your bold letters aren't working, perhaps you just need to go into edit and refresh that?? Sometimes that works! Thanks again and good luck! Blissful Princess
Ignore the above about rule 5, I really need to open my eyes
Sorry!
Edited on Nov 11, 5:10 because 'My eyes were obviously blurry at time of reading'.
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