Sell to me your sections,
your unbridled responses,
and all your affections.
Fix them into my mind,
into my tarnished thoughts,
and allow me to unwind.
Your subtle glorious gaze,
piercing my beating heart,
causing my strife to haze.
The flow of your hair
like long bustling fields,
swaying with the gusts of air.
Your soft sensuous skin,
passing along my fingers
causes my mouth to peek a grin.
The whispered words of your lips
seducing the drums of my ears,
each word caressing like fingertips.
The sweet pleasurable neck
that I run my kiss along
waiting for you to interject,
to turn the tables onto me
and push your passion to my being
so we know bliss to it's utmost epitome.
It seems the strings of our hearts
strum the same exact chord,
pleading that neither harmony departs.
So sell me your sections,
your unbridled responses,
and all of your affections,
because my love will remain
through the harsh and the high
and I'll be yours and hope only the same.
Author notes
If only I was a better linguist.
Written November 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- Ain't Love Grand? by TheDemonEve.
450 points, ended June 4, 2007, 17 entries
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i like it, good job, i like the detail of the poem also what i really liked about it wasThe sweet pleasurable neck
that I run my kiss along
waiting for you to interject,
to turn the tables onto me
that part is is beautiful good luc -
I love how you portrayed your hearts almost as instruments on which each of you played sweet songs of love for one another. I also love your metaphor and word choice. Lovely!
Best of luck and thanks for entering! -
I jsut don't know what say excep I did love it.
It stole my heart. very very good.
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thank you very much!
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I reread this one today, and it made me smile again.
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Awwwwww... This is simply beautiful, love!
And you are a great linguist! What are you talking about!?!?
You render me speechless!
(either that or I'm being kicked off the computer right now 
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