I write these words
I feel these rhymes
The love expressed
Wasn't hard to find
I know that our love
Is true and great
I know our feelings
Are of true fate
Chorus
All the words
That express my thoughts
All the lyrics
That tell what love has brought
All the words
That the heart can bring
All the lyrics
That I can sing
Brings me your love
Which is all I think of
I find the paper
That can fit the terms
Of the inspiration
Our love confirms
In all my life
I never had power
To write so much
And have the words tower
Repeat Chorus
I love this feeling
That has me entranced
To put this pencil down
And express this romance
The beats of the heart
Go on as the paper fills
The truth of the words
That go out and spill
Repeat Chorus
Author notes
Written November 10th, 2006
What did you think
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I really like this, but it has kind of short sentences, but its still really good..
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Wow, this is really good
Good job Matt -
I like this
I sort of feel a melody to these lyrics. Do you have one? Words are so often all we have to express our feelings. Thanks so much for entering my contest. I really appreciate it.
Andy
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Wonderful!
I think what I liked most was that the rhyme wasn't forced, and it had a very natural rhythm. Do you have a melody set to this? This would be a gorgeous alto or second soprano solo, with piano accompaniment.
^_^ Sorry, the band geek and choir nazi have gotten the best of me...
Seriously, though, this is great!
Tamaska
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Aww
Aww this is sweet I love it!you did a great job writing this keep up the good work.
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sounds like a really nice song. would be nice if you could find a good artist to sing it. thanks so much for your entry.
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Beautiful
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rythme is cool
From start to finish the flow of minimilist lexical syllable after syllable earns this song it's merit. Well done.
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great lyrics
this is so freakin sweet. LOL! Do I hear the music industry calling? Seriously this would be a great song. Get out there and form a band lol! Keep up the good work!
Ali xx
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YAY!
"I find the paper
That can fit the terms
Of the inspiration
Our love confirms
In all my life
I never had power
To write so much
And have the words tower"
I loved these verses! You really must have gotten some insiration because this is a big step for you in writing [I've been reading some of your other stuff and this is the best by far!] I'm sure you could write and write and write about so many things, anyone could, but to express each different level of a simple feeling is truely a gift [if you understand what I'm saying]. Continue writing because I believe it will help you with many things in life, as it has helped me.
-BxBxBx
PS.
Just finished reading another Dean Koontz, False Memory, read it before? If you haven't, DO! Because it is freaking awesome! -
heartfelt writing. excellent.
this is a fine pome and song. i like it because of its honesty.I too write song and pomes.cheak out my site ..tell me your thoughts. I would welcome them . you have a real feel for writing.It progresses in a fine mellow read.I have a piece titled THE MAGIC.Your writing name brought me to your site. it's the name of a band I used to play in. pretty wild. Looking foward to reading more of your writing.
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wow....i have never read a poem so great in a long time. it's so beautiful. great job. deffinetly fantastic. it flows, it rhymes perfectly. keep writing. you're very good. <33
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