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Hollow

I need you to care

Crushing my heart

I can feel it as the air leaves my lungs

As the blood rushes to my head

Love me

Please

Please

Please...

Like you did before

I am sorry for the things that I have done
Screamed those hollow sentences at you

I can't take it back

You've hurt me so much more...

But I let go...and I love you

Your distant voice says so much that you can't say
It says you're sorry

And that you wish things weren't so lost

I didn't do it to hurt you
I did it to save us

You can't see

You won't see

This can't be shallow...can't be untrue

Please

I need it

I need you

Author notes

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Written November 10th, 2006

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