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Just Kill Me

Take away the pain, this calls goes out to only one and you know who you are.

If you could see the pain i have suffered through
because of you, you would know.

You may not be this problem anymore, but you sure
were the trigger.

My stress is astounding. I only wish you were my
true demise.

You have killed me on the inside, by god, you can kill
me on the outside.

Lay me in the dirt, and bury me deep. Make a false unmarked grave i dont
want anyone to know where i am.

Just hide me in the woods, And make sure they dont find me and
when they do i will have a note telling them i wanted it.

I love you, You ate me this is my hated demise. So i ask you
Jus kill me.

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to well those who read it who know her will know who its about
Written November 10th, 2006

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  • DeeplyFallen2010
    November 6, 2007
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    this is really good.


  • March 28, 2007

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    I REALLY HOPE THIS IS NOT ABOUT ME AND IF IT IS I AM REALLY SORRY!!!!!! I MISS YOU SO MUCH!!! I LOVE YOU!!
    LOVE ALWAYS,
    MARIA


  • BeautifulKyrptonite
    November 13, 2006
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    Its very outspoken, I think I may know who this is about. I dont like to read about your pain, let alone see it, for you dont deserve it. Its life though, as much as I hate to say it.
    Im here to talk whenever you need it, you know that, I understand why you wouldnt though , its bad enough to live through the pain, nevertheless talk about it.

    Muchlove

  • HopelessDreamer2010
    November 11, 2006
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    Mason...who would this be about???...cough cough....call me!
    ~lacey~


  • blue128eyedkk
    November 10, 2006
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    In my point of view as a reader, i love it because this is how i feel when i go home everyday after school. I would rather die then having to go home and deal with the BS. This is short, but filled with alot of emotion.I like it. Great job. keep it up! Check out some of my writes?

    -karen

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