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Algebra of Love


(a+a) = aa

Both sides of the equation are mirrors
yet one side male one side female
ahh, but I am on the wrong side of my own equation
where I belong, alone, yet intimate
and no one is on the other side, for want of opportunity

I wear this equation with love abundant
with unknowing approvals from those
who fulfill the functions for me
indulging myself by indulging them
and loving myself through their love

such an equation is unsolvable, yet inevitable
and exquisite in its symmetry and beauty
a gift for me I can never collect
a stipend earned and never paid
a blessing given, never to be realized

it sustains me, until this has passed

Author notes

For a, a, a and of course, a. With a big smile and a deep bow of the most insincere apology.

For BabysNoAngel as promised.
Written November 10th, 2006

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  • Amber Danielle
    November 11, 2006
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    Better start reading. LMAO

  • PerVirtuous Allan gold member
    November 11, 2006
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    Ha ha ha. Dang! Now I have to read up on my nuclear physics!!!

  • Amber Danielle
    November 11, 2006
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    I'm glad that you found it funny. Technically he's not my husband, I never trap myself. I'm a 23 year old divorcee and don't intend on becoming a 2nd time divorcee, or Mrs. anytime soon for that matter. I promise, next time we do cold fusion I will not play hard to get. Love you.

  • PerVirtuous Allan gold member
    November 11, 2006
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    Well, agapanthus, how could the art of multiplying not be romantic in some way?

  • PerVirtuous Allan gold member
    November 11, 2006
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    Thanks for the comment, Honey. I intend to keep it up for as long as I can and continue to write as well!

  • PerVirtuous Allan gold member
    November 11, 2006
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    OK, Priestess, I like the way you pretend to be the true girlfriend here, but every time we get together to do laundry or perfect cold fusion, you play hard to get and hide halfway across the country with your husband. Your comment is, therefore, hilarious and if you keep it up I am going to find you and insist you make good on this implied relationship!!!!
    Edited on Nov 11, 2:46 p.m. because ''.

  • Amber Danielle
    November 10, 2006
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    This is absolutely beautiful. I love how you dedicate one thing to four people, and i'm sure all are utterly clueless. If it weren't for the strong trust I have in you I would be green with envy and absolutely jealous. (winks) Love you.

  • agapanthus
    November 10, 2006
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    I never thought you could put maths and poetry together but you have managed it really well. this is a good piece.
    x

  • honey bear
    November 10, 2006
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    very good

    ooh deep..very deep ha ha ha but i just LOVE it .great work my friend very good ,very thought provoking .keep it up my friend (and keep up the good work too)

  • Fire N Ice
    November 10, 2006
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    Hummmmmm, need to think about this a little.
    ill be back with a verdict fit for a perv LMAO
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